15 abr 2012

SPORT AND HEALTH

Nowadays people are healthier than 30 years ago, because people do more sport, eat better and are worried about their health. Moreover, there are more gyms, cycleways have been created, a huge variety of sports have come out and medicine has evolved in that issue. On the other hand, new problems which didn't exist before, such as sedentarim or a sedentary lifestyle and obesity, have also appeared.

Since people don't have much time,  they prefer to use their car or public transport rather than walk or cycle and go to restaurants that serve junk food, also known as fast food, because it's cheap and doesn't take long to cook. Besides, when they have time, they prefer to stay at home rather than go out for a walk, run... Consequently, there are more obese adults and children. These days, child  obesity is a seriously problem that must be treated, because kids only like this sort of food and parents, as they don't want to argue, let them eat unhealthy food.

To sum up, it's true that today we are healthier than the people of the sixties, but we also have problems that they didn't have. So, what we have to do is try to solve these problems so as to be healthy.

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