Since people don't have much time, they prefer to use their car or public transport rather than walk or cycle and go to restaurants that serve junk food, also known as fast food, because it's cheap and doesn't take long to cook. Besides, when they have time, they prefer to stay at home rather than go out for a walk, run... Consequently, there are more obese adults and children. These days, child obesity is a seriously problem that must be treated, because kids only like this sort of food and parents, as they don't want to argue, let them eat unhealthy food.
To sum up, it's true that today we are healthier than the people of the sixties, but we also have problems that they didn't have. So, what we have to do is try to solve these problems so as to be healthy.
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