Nowadays lots of people often go the gym as physical appearance is becoming more and more important in our society. There are gyms opening up all over the place because there are many different activities to choose from there.
People like going to the gym mainly to get fit, especially in spring, so that they can show off their bodies in the summer. Furthermore, it’s a good way to meet people and make friends who share the same interests. What’s more, it is healthy as long as you don’t become obsessed and overdo it, which might cause injuries. Personally, I prefer to do competitive sports and if I can choose I prefer outdoor sports. Nevertheless, it is better to do some kind of activity than nothing at all.
In conclusion, I think doing any sort of physical activity is better than staying at home and doing nothing and besides, you don’t have to be good at sport to go to a gym and have a good time.
Thank you Lotti for posting it so soon. Good structure ,no mistakes this time and you've remembered to use connectors. I have simply added a few commas.
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