Nowadays many people spend too much time in front of their computers. Children use Facebook daily, as an engaging way to socialize and waste a lot of time.
Parents should keep an eye on their children when they use Facebook, firstly because the children can spend hours in Facebook without realizing. Facebook isn't good for the studies because in addition to making children waste their time, they get hoocked. Access to Facebook has to be monitored by parents. Facebook can be dangetrous unless you protect your personal information and addiction isn't good. If parents keep an eye on their children they can prevent Facebook addiction and they can teach their kids to use ther time with other appropriate activities.
In my opinion Facebook isn't bad if it used in moderation so I agree that parents should monitor their children.
Good, but maybe you can use more synoms. You use Facebook 8 times.
ResponderEliminarI agree with you Francina. Lots of people prefer to spend their time in front of their computer than stdudy. It's dangerous for their future and they are not conscious of their acts.
ResponderEliminarI agree with you, we should spend less time in social networks. And as Carlos says you've used too many times "Facebook".
ResponderEliminarI disagree with you, I don't think parent's should monitor their children. But I agree with you as we should spend less time in front of computer in order not to stay so much hours in social networks like facebook. Good structure but you should take more care, as carlos said, on the uses of synonims.
ResponderEliminarI agree with you Francina but only when you see that children spend too much time in front of their computers
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