It seems that shopping is one of the more/most common addictions at present. An addiction is the state of being enslaved to a habit or practice. Therefore, many people are shopaholic.
It’s clear that being a shopaholic can be awful to the person's economy and what’s more, being it or not can be conditioned by the money which that person has. Even so it’s too easy tobbecome shopaholic. Nowadays, all we see is trying to control our actions, publicity, for example, is continuously present in our lives and tries to convince us to shop. Also, shops put the most demanded products at the end of the establishment in order to make the customer cross all the shop.
To conclude I must say that probably, we’ve all shopped something that we didn't need and that doesn’t turn us into shopaholics. But we must be careful because it could be a serious problem.
Aitana Bernabeu. 2A A
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ResponderEliminarI like your point of view. I think that the world of advertising is very important for all those companies who wish to sell their products.
ResponderEliminarAlthough we don't realize, they cheat us with ease and that makes us buy their products while they are enriching.
You're right Yaiza! We must be concious of that! It's true.
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