First of all, in Spain in recent years unemployment has been increasing because of the crisis. The crisis has left millions of people out of work and so many people can not afford basic needs such as food, clothing, among other things. Even some parents are forced to steal in order to eat. Young people have been hardest hit in this crisis because there is a very high percentage unemployed, and they are the future of this country.
Furthermore, people do not make money and therefore they can not afford the house and they are forced to go back home with their family or even the street. But fortunately, they are taken to the most serious cases.
In conclusion, unemployment causes distress and discouragement among the Spanish population, because they see that they can not pay expenses ... their basic needs.
Rocío Alonso Seguí, 2º batx A
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ResponderEliminarI completlly agree with you. The unemployement is the most serius problem nowadays. If we didn't solve that, we could solve other problems, because, If the people don't have their basic needs, they wouldn't worry and try to solve another problems to help our country.
ResponderEliminarI agree with you. Nowadays Spain have a lot of problems, but unemployment is the most important, because without jobs people can't pay all expenses that families have. And each time new generations have more difficulties to find a job and to be independent.
ResponderEliminarI agree with you Rocio. Now unemployment is a problem that covering our days and really it affects our well-being because many people are passing bad moments in their lifes for all reasons that you have explained.
ResponderEliminarGood opinion!
In my opinion all that you have said is correct, it's true. I think (I also have written about unemployment) that's a big problem now, specially in Spain. I agree that people passes a really difficult problems...
ResponderEliminarYou're right Rocio. We must make aware that in order to stop it, because is one of the most serious problems at the moment. And what's most worrying for us is that it's increasing!
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