5 ene 2013

Do you think unemployment is the worst worrying problem in Spain today?

Unemployment is the biggest problem in Spain and is affecting a big percentage of the habitants of our country. In my opinion this situation makes that the families can’t live like others times and they must keep much money than after. As a consequence the shops earn less money.

Firstly, I think that the unemployment cause the discomfort of the families that have oftheir members without a job, and this is a bad situation for them, because they can’t go on with their live quality. However, if the people didn’t waste much more than they had, the situation wouldn’t be like it is.
In ... second place, I think that if the country has a lot of people without ... job, its administration will can’t pay the pensions of the people that is retired.  Therefore, in my opinion the jubilation age should be above seventy-five years. As a consequence, the administration doesn’t have to pay so much money.

In conclusion, the unemployment is of the biggest problems of Spain and this cause that the families’ situation is not the same as years before. Also the country’s administration can’t pay to retired people, because there are not sufficient people with ... job to collect money to pay them.
                                                                     Alejandro Tudurí Sintes 2B

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