Firstly, the prices are a bargain and there are a lot of sales during the year. Also there are a lot of shops and a lot of variety to buy. Moreover, there is a lot of publicity on television, on the radio, on the street... and people want to buy more. Consequently, people buy things that they really don’t need and which are unnecessary. Furthermore, some of these people are addicted to go shopping and buy a lot of things.
To conclude, the advantages of the price, the variety and the publicity can be good for the shops because people buy more, but it can be prejudicial for some people who are shoppping addicted and who buy in excess.
Miriam Romero 2B
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ResponderEliminarI have another point of view. I think that the price of products when we buy it don't care us, because if we like it, we are going to buy. But today, prices have risen and now people don't buy so much.
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