First of all the shopping addiction is caused by the large amount of advertising and promotions during the year. People buy things that they don’t need and could use this money to pay or buy more important things. That’s due to advertising. Many people buy clothes if they are announced by famous people. Moreover, publicity in general convinces us to buy more stuff. Secondly, when we go shopping, we should make a list with all the things we really need. We must be responsible with the things we buy. I think I'm not a shopaholic because I only go to shop when there’s a discount. I only buy things that I really need. I like shopping but I can’t afford to buy everything I like.
To sum up, before going to buy we should be clear to us what we want to buy and what we really need to avoid buying useless things.
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ResponderEliminarI agree with your point of view on the shopping addiction. And especially with the great idea to make a list of things needed or you would like to buy, as it later turns out that you have bought things that were not necessary and they have forgotten the clothes really were.
ResponderEliminarI agree with you, because it's true that we should be sure about what we really need and what is good to buy. But, although the list is a good idea to know what is useful, when we are talking about clothes, I think is difficult to make one.
ResponderEliminarI agree with you, because I think that many people buy more things that it isn't necessary. Also I think that many people don't value many things.
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