Do you think unemployment is the worst worrying problem in Spain today?
I am sure that now a days unemployment is the most serious problem in our society, because young people unemployment has increased due to high level of school drop-out youth.
On the one hand, the reason for young unemployment could be for example the Spanish educational system. A good educational system is key to achieving employment; abandonment in Spain is the second highest in Europe. With the boom of the real state bubble numerous opportunities have emerged in the construction sector, for young people without qualifications that could get generous wages , leaving compulsory education.
On the other hand, I think young people have greater labor vulnerabilities in the current economic crisis, some solutions to solve this serious situation would be for instance collect higher taxes from millionaires, eliminate the monarchy forever, change the structure of the current job market so that there may be more jobs.
In conclusion, the unemployment problem is serious , but there are different solutions to address such as: the promotion of education or training to prevent dropping out of school, job search support, business assistance and implement special programmes for young people who do not study or are in the labor market.
Melisa fernández Ardaya. 2:C
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ResponderEliminarI've liked your essay, I think it is a serious problem where we need a quick solution , as it can be worse. Nowadays students that drop out their studies is because in their houses there is no control, so the first change or solution would be that parents should take more atention in what their children do in their studies and make them work hard telling them they need a degree or course to be able to work as if not, they won't be able to have a good life as to have one you need to work hard and nowadays even more.
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ResponderEliminarYoung people, who are qualified, is going out to other countries because of the unemployment. Spain is one of these countries who people emigrate because in other countries there are more opportunities to get a job specialized in their degrees. So I think that the education it's important but It's not really one of the causes of the unemployment.
ResponderEliminareducational system could be one of the reasons of young unemployement, but i don't think it's the only one.In my opinion other reason could be that employers don't give job to young people because they want them to have experience, but it's a little bit difficult if they don't give young people a job.
ResponderEliminarThe crisis is serious, of course. It affects people in many ways, however, what anyone says here is that part of the blame lies with the people themselves. In Spain there is the misconception is fool who pays and who doesn't is smart. Ladies and gentlemen, this problem could have been avoided if the today's community doesn't look any method or way to avoid paying taxes such as IVA and others.
ResponderEliminarI've liked your essay, In my opinion I think it is a serious problem that we can resolve. young people have more problems because in the job wanted that they have experience.
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