Firstly, unemployment has become in a national problem. Every day we can see on the television people that after having lost their jobs, they lost their house. Another reason is that, in a short time, you move from being employed to being unemployed. For example, a family who lives well thanks to the salary of the father, if he loses the job, the family will suddenly become poor. Finally, unemployment is a big problem, because an unemployed person spends less money than when this person had a job therefore he will buy less things and consequently more people will become unemployed.
In conclusion, I think that unemployment is the biggest problem nowadays in Spain and I hope that in the next years many unemployed people could find work.
Javi Melia -C
Now try to correct the mistakes in red and add CORRECTED in the title. Remember to keep the mistakes in red.
ResponderEliminarI agree with you That the unemployment is the biggest problem in Spain nowadays. We are going through a very difficult situation as the crisis in which it's difficult to keep your job.
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