In my opinion, I think that shopping can become an addiction, because, when some people buy (No matter what they buy), they feel better. They use shopping like a therapy, a medicine or even a drug. On the other hand, shopping is a way of life, I mean, you earn your money and then you spend it buying all kind of things (food, clothes, gadgets...). The problem is that peolple sometimes buy things that they don't need because they have seen the commercials and they think that they can't live without the product that is announced.
To conclude, I think that shopping not necessarily becomes an addiction if you ... only things that you need or if you don't go shopping often, but the problem is people buy things because they have seen in the commercials and they think that they can't live without them.
Pau Vidal Gomila 2n Batx A
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ResponderEliminarI agree with you on the idea of commercials which shows us this idea of a necessary product for our life and lot of people believe it, and consequently buy the product
ResponderEliminarI agree with youpau, shopping generally makes us feel better, but,it's have became adictive if we do not control front of the sales
ResponderEliminarI think you make a good point about becoming addicted and spending the whole day shopping.
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