In my opinion, the unemployment is not just the only problem that haunts Spain; for example, the cuts that the States are doing now are very important and it's estimated that they will increase too. The health cuts and cuts in education are generating serious problems, but these problems are in the background. It seems that all these problems are caused by the economic crisis. Spain is considered one of the countries of the European Union where there is more unemployment and it's the worst worrying problem in Spain.
For this reason the state should help people who are unemployed to improve the country's economy. I think that it is not easy but if everyone contribute, this problem could go into the background.
Ana Claudia Chupillón, 2n C
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ResponderEliminarI am also in agreement that cuts in health and education are even giving serious social problems, the government should take measures that affect both the middles classes are the ones who suffer most in the crisis and the poorest even worse.
ResponderEliminarThis is exactly the same that I think. Nowadays, the unemployment is probably the worst problem that we have in Sapin. There are lots of families, that none of them have a job. For this reason, the state should arrenge this stituacion in Spain.
ResponderEliminarI think that government should take measures to resolve the problems but nowadays, the government is interesting in the money and not the serious situation.
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