Firstly, I think unemployment is the worst worrying problem in Spain today, because if people haven't a job, they won't have money to do anything.
Secondly, in my view, the worst thing about this problem is that qualified people are emigrating to get a job, because here they are unemployed. I believe that this situation will be worse in the next years, at least in the next four.
In conclusion, people are getting desperate to get a job, because they need money for eat, but I hope that some day will be work for everyone.
Isaac Sanchez Cardona 2n C.
The next time I want you to use 3 paragraphs, this time I've had to separate them for you! Where is the conclusion?
ResponderEliminarNow try to correct the mistakes in red and add CORRECTED in the title. Remember to keep the mistakes in red.
I like it, simple but interesting, few words but well explained... you must get good marks in economy.
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ResponderEliminarFirstly I think the unemployment problem is not a big problem out of the EU and secondly many people use crisis for doing nothing and live in "lazy" mode.
ResponderEliminarI think that the unemployment is the consequence of be governed by hypocrites and liars. The fault is our to accept this. The essay is good but you should add this.
ResponderEliminarI'ts a good essay but I think It's a little short, I'm agree with you.
ResponderEliminarThis is pretty short, I think you could've done a bit more.
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