7 ene 2013

Is shopping an adiction?


Now a days, because off the global crisis, shopping still being (T) a compulsive act for a lot of people, and why shopping could be (WO) an addiction?

Some people are use (T) to shop (T) when ... are depressed or nervous, after a time, they need to buy something every time they are depressed or nervous. This behavior is considered an addiction, because they need to shop and they feel better after do (T) it. These types (G) of people need help from psychologists or doctors. But they are a little group of people. Other people are affected by ... media, which shows him (G) lot of stupid products and finally people buy unnecessary things. Besides these (WW), the sales are the principal (WW) cause of shopping, because when we see a sale (WW), we think that it is a bargain and buy it. Furthermore if the sales are on (prep) Christmas, the purchases are bigger. Some people, after buy(Y) something, feel bad and worse before buy(T) it, because they regret of buy (T) without ...reason.

I think that some people need help to overcome their addiction, but shopping isn’t always an addiction, when we buy something without reason, it could be because of propaganda. In my opinion, we shouldn’t pay attention to publicity, because this want to we(G) buy their products. 
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2 comentarios:

  1. Now try to correct the mistakes in red and add CORRECTED in the title. Remember to keep the mistakes in red. Pay attention to the tenses!

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  2. I like it! I agree with your point of view because I think that propaganda is one of the most important things that make people buy more and more. Another thing are the sales and I agree too.

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