9 ene 2013

Do you think shopping is an addiction? Do people always need th things they buy when they go shopping? What about you? Explain. Corrected

Nowaday the sales, above all, after Christmas, is when shops reduce prices of expensive articles, this produces/ causes large/ long queues, moreover, a lot of people are waiting all night or in sleeping bags, to buy cheap goods.


On the one hand, most people when they go shoping, needs/ when most people go shopping, they need to buy something, although they don't need it, only to take up in the wardrop/ wardrobe. But they buy for/ because of  television advertising on TV, etc...
On the other hand some people don't know that they could have a problem with shopping like alcoholics. These people sometimes ... bankrupt, because they buy much more than they can. People have an additction when it happens.


In my opinion sales are a cheat created by large companies who/ that only worry about earning money.
elena  2n Batx A

2 comentarios:

  1. Now try to correct the mistakes in red and add CORRECTED in the title. Remember to keep the mistakes in red.

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  2. I agree with you Elena.
    Shopping can be a very serious problem if it's scape out of our control.
    I would say that although i don't consider miself shopaholic, I like go shopping!

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