First of all shopping has become an addiction as a consequence of advertisements that encourage people to buy products which they may not need or perhaps they’ve already got and don’t remember, causing unnecessary expense and an accumulation of useless products at home. Although people should try and buy less, if they stopped buying products, a lot of shops would close and the economy would go down and everything would be worse. In my case, I haven’t got this problem as I prefer to save and keep my money until I grow up and really need it.
In conclusion, those shoppers who have this addiction should try and reduce the unnecessary expense, and buy just what they really need and try not to be influenced by the shops and their advertisements.
Alex Vidal Hiscock 2nBatx.B
Well done! You don't really need to repeat the word "causing", so you can erase it.
ResponderEliminarI agree with you, people buy some products because only want to buy, they don't think about their utility. I like your conclusion, is a right conclusion.
ResponderEliminarI share your thoughts about keeping money to buy usefull things, personally I only go shopping once a year. Good redaction alex!
ResponderEliminar