We are in a society based on physical appearance. We all follow a model of beauty with the desire to have a perfect body and a pretty face.
In my opinion the biggest culprit of this is the media. The media have a great influence on people, we want to be like the big musician stars, supermodels, ... In this way we get into our head a false ideal of beauty creating complexes, loss of self-esteem and self confidence.We become machines managed by media buying everything offered to us to get that beauty that the media presents and we so desire.
In conclution, we have to learn to love who we are and how we are, prevent the media influence our lives and ultimately not allow anything or anyone to tell us how we have to be. If not, we will never be happy.
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ResponderEliminarI agree with you Yeray, the principal cause our society based on the physical appearence is the media. Your conclution is really good, nice job Yeray!!
ResponderEliminarI agree, television show us how we have to be. That it's wrong, it isn't only advertising, in the tv programs we only watch pretty girls and boys with a perfect type of body.
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