9 ene 2013

Now a days, because  ... the global crisis, shopping is a compulsive act for a lot of people, and why shopping could be (WO) an addiction?

Some people are used to go shopping when they are depressed or nervous, after a time, they need to buy something every time they are depressed or nervous. This behavior is considered an addiction, because they need to shop and they feel better after have done it. These typ of people need help from psychologists or doctors. But they are a little group of people. Other people are affected by ... media, which shows them lot of stupid products and finally people buy unnecessary things.In spite of the sales are the principal (WW) cause of shopping, because when we see a sale (WW), we think that it is a bargain and buy it. Furthermore if the sales are on (prep) Christmas, the purchases are bigger. Some people, after buy(Y) something, feel bad and worse before buy(T) it, because they regret of buy (T) without ...reason.

I think that some people need help to overcome their addiction, but shopping isn’t always an addiction, when we buy something without reason, it could be because of propaganda. In my opinion, we shouldn’t pay attention to publicity, because this want to we(G) buy their products.

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2 comentarios:

  1. Now try to correct the mistakes in red and add CORRECTED in the title. Remember to keep the mistakes in red.

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  2. Hello Ignasi. This essay is very interesant. The ''shopping adiction'' could be very dangerous because is like an obsesion and people lose a lot of money.

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