Firstly, I think that advertising has an important repercussion on this fact with their slogans. They show people that their products are the newest and the coolest so everybody wants to have that garment. They need to have it, to show to world that they are the coolest, the most modern. Without those objects, they feel empty, depressive, as if they were missing something in their lives. They rely on shopping like alcoholics rely on alcohol.
Secondly, most of the people who go shopping do it to hide something that they miss, people who have been stricken by something. They try to solve it with better clothes, modern bags or new shoes, but this satisfaction, only last for a short period of time.
To sum up, I think that solve your problems with shopping, alcohol or something like that is not the solution, so we need to help people to stop doing these things.
Júlia Fàbregues Pons 2nBatx. A
Now read the essay and pay attention to the words in blue. Then erase the words in red and change the whole colour (original colour- black) and write FINAL VERSION next to the title.
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