I think that wearing a tattoo should not influence a person in his or her job. First, because employees who have a tattoo can still work well anb be good employees. In addition, a person isn't chosen by an employer because she or he has a tattoo, and he is looking at her or his appearence.
In conclusion, I think that tattoos are a fashion accessory that can be very nice. But we must also think that it is something you do forever and can become annoying.
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ResponderEliminarIt`s true that tattoos are nice and a fashionable accecory that most of the peole use for show their personality, but I think that there are another ways to show your likes, for example, wearing a T-shirt of your favourite music group, a bracalet or something like that because, at my view, tattoos are painfull and harmfull four our health.
ResponderEliminarI agree with you. Tattoos are a fad and people are constantly tattooing without thinking. I think people should think more when going to get tattooed by the negative effects they can have. Despite all this, tattoos should not influence the work, since what matters is efficiency and not the image.
ResponderEliminarI agree that wearing a tattoo should not influence a person in his or her job, but at the same time i think that if someone wear some kind of tattoos (for example racist tattoo) and this person work with the public, it could be affect the job because maybe gives a bad image for business.
ResponderEliminarI don't agree with your point of view. I think that tattoos aren't good, because you can loose your job, or, in one moment of your life, you can dislike these tattoo, and they are forever (you can remove it, but it's difficult).
ResponderEliminarI think that wearing a tattoo is not reason enough to judge people, so I agree that it shouldn't affect employment opportunities. Nevertheless, as I see it, wearing tattoos is something we should consider very carefully, because we may regret in the future.
ResponderEliminarI think that tattoos are a fashion accessory that many people use to show something they like. I also think that having a tattoo shouldn't affect or influence a person in his job.
ResponderEliminarIt's true that tattoos don't interfere in the mode of being of the people, but if it comes to work and study that heads down to the smallest detail about you. They don't care if they aren't in sight but resent them if they are.
ResponderEliminarI'm disagree with your point of view. Some tattos are beautiful but it can make lose your job if you work in front of the public.
ResponderEliminarI agree with you because I also think that wearing a tattoo is beautiful, but I disagree with you when you say that the tattoo won't make you lose your job, but I think that is false because in some jobs tattoos ara banned.
ResponderEliminarI think that deciding wether or not to have a tattoo is a very important decition because you will have it for the rest of your live and, depending of which kind of tattoo, you may regret of it some years later.
ResponderEliminarI agree with you when you say that having a tattoo should not affect to your job. Having a tattoo is not a cause to judge someone.
Normally the employers study their employees personalities before being hired. Many people thinks that having a tatto is a synonym of bad personality and it can injure the opinion of the employer when he has to choose about hire or not.
ResponderEliminarHello Monica. I think that you essay are regularly. Really you would like a doctor, a banker, a chef... with tattos? The first on the laboral world is the appearance. Don't forget it!
ResponderEliminarI don't totally agree with you: a tattoo isn't always a fashion accessory, but also an expression of a feeling or something important that you want to remember.
ResponderEliminarBut today, jobs seek people without visible tattoos,for the simple fact that they present purity and elegance.
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ResponderEliminarI agree with you that there are tattoos that are pretty, but I disagree with you that wear a tattoo does not affect the person's job. Imagine, if you go to a store and you see a full employee of tattoos or piercings, and you see other, who is better looking, you'll surely ask to employee seems most correct. Maybe at our age we can't yet set ourselves much in this, but adult people looks much this aspect, and if I were the boss of a company and had to choose between the same person, but with tattoos or without; I would choose the person who haven't tattoos.
ResponderEliminarI also think that a little tattoo with something meaningful does no harm. My viewpoint above is referred to larger tattoos without meaning for the wearer.